Ponder well your journey
In the past and ask
Did I do all that could be done
To stop this tragedy?
Lives lost, such a waste
Nothing gained only
Empty, empty space .
Touch their souls
Let them see
A heart beats here
Knowing their courageousness.
~ Patrice
© Patrice Clarkson – 2011
Heart touching write, Patrice. ♥
I appreciate your words and heart.
Nice tribute, Patrice. Well said.
http://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2011/09/11/farmers-lament-2/
Thank you, but does not come close to the sadness and remorse felt that day by us all.
Touching tribute to those who lost their lives.
Here is my entry
http://jackedwardspoetry.blogspot.com/2011/09/rose.html
Thank you. Must say something. After ten, even twenty years, they will not be forgotten.
did man do enough or did man overdid it this time? nice one patrice! my potluck.. http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2011/04/09/summer-wind/
I truly believe we all have to look within ourselves for the answer for us alone. Nice work you have!
such a lovely write and tribute but I do not think this day will ever be forgotten and the land marks gone will make sure of this one
http://gatelesspassage.com/2011/08/27/the-island-breeze/
I agree with you, it will never be forgotten. Nor should it be. Thank you for your comment!
Hi Patrice
A great tribute.. thanks for sharing.. I liked your lines a lot…
“Lives lost, such a waste
Nothing gained only
Empty, empty space .”
thanks
Shashi
ॐ नमः शिवाय
Om Namah Shivaya
http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.com/2011/09/whispers-in-memories-way-of-soul.html
At twitter @VerseEveryDay
Thank you Shashi. And your words and work are beautiful.